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Friday 15th January

L.O. To write effective sentences


Use this page to write down your ideas for your sentences:

Mr Spencer’s sentences

All of a sudden, I saw someone - a girl?


She didn’t look like any of the girls I knew. She wore a sandy-coloured tunic and her long, blonde hair was knotted and wild.


“Hello! I’m Robert,” I managed, “What’s your name?”

Then someone made a noise that sounded like, “Om”.


Add more detailed description of what the girl looks like.