Friday 15th January
L.O. To write effective sentences
Use this page to write down your ideas for your sentences:
Mr Spencer’s sentences
All of a sudden, I saw someone - a girl?
She didn’t look like any of the girls I knew. She wore a sandy-coloured tunic and her long, blonde hair was knotted and wild.
“Hello! I’m Robert,” I managed, “What’s your name?”
Then someone made a noise that sounded like, “Om”.
Add more detailed description of what the girl looks like.