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Wednesday 13th January

L.O. To write effective sentences

 

Use this page to write down your ideas for the sentences:

(Try to write some ideas down before our Zoom session this morning if you can)

Mr Spencer’s sentences

When I awoke, I was in a dark, damp place.

 

I could see a patchwork of emerald and gold fields, glistening on the horizon.

 

I stumbled towards it. Soon, I realised I was lost. Completely lost. Completely, utterly lost.

Now have a go at your own sentences!

 

 

Challenge:

 

Sentence 1: Add more description of what the character can see and feel in the cave.

Sentence 2: Add more description of what the character can see from the entrance of the cave.

Sentence 3: Add more description of how the character is feeling - maybe you could use some ‘show not tell’.

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