Tuesday 12th January
L.O. To write effective sentences
Use this page to write down your ideas for your sentences.
(Try to write some ideas down before our Zoom session this morning if you can)
Mr Spencer’s sentences
An astonishing thing once happened to me.
Wandering in the woods one day...I suddenly changed direction.
I tripped and found myself falling down, down, down.
Now have a go at your own sentences!
Sentence 1 - can you add some more description to make the reader excited for the story?
Sentence 2 - can you add some description about what you could see in the woods? What could you hear in the woods?
Sentence 3 - add some sentences to describe how you would be feeling at this point.