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Monday 25th January

L.O. To write effective sentences for an adventure story


Use this page to write down your ideas for your sentences.

(Try to write some ideas down before our Zoom session this morning if you can)


Mr Spencer’s sentences


As the shadows began to lengthen, we spotted a reindeer grazing.


Spears flying, men shouting, ground shaking, we caught the reindeer.


What an experience! I felt like a cowboy with his lasso, galloping across the plains.





Sentence 1: Describe creeping up to the reindeer. Describe the setting and what the reindeer looks like.

Sentence 2: Use a simile or use a synonym for ‘caught’.

Sentence 3: Add more description of his thoughts and feelings.